I have watched these movies every day and my main complaint was that it was always SUPER short and felt like no story was achieved. I have to say that you finally made it a decent length and added a closure to your episode that is satisfying, at the same time I am wondering why this isnt over 3.0.
Thank you for finally making it a little longer, these are definitely getting better
There is nothing wrong about it, but the only reason I am giving it a 7 instead of 10 is that it is FAR too short. Maybe if you have 3 of these scenes and release them as one flash you will get a high score, but due to it being so incredibly short, some people (including myself) feel like nothing was gained by the short ending and wanting more.
While the animation was very very smooth, it left me wanting more but at the same time I felt like nothing was achieved.
While there is nothing wrong with the animation itself, I am giving you a 7 because its far too short and I was hoping you could make a series out of this and add some story etc.
Technically its there (animation sense), but as a story and other elements that go with it, its lacking.
All in all, made me chuckle =)
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