I have watched these movies every day and my main complaint was that it was always SUPER short and felt like no story was achieved. I have to say that you finally made it a decent length and added a closure to your episode that is satisfying, at the same time I am wondering why this isnt over 3.0.
Thank you for finally making it a little longer, these are definitely getting better
There is nothing wrong about it, but the only reason I am giving it a 7 instead of 10 is that it is FAR too short. Maybe if you have 3 of these scenes and release them as one flash you will get a high score, but due to it being so incredibly short, some people (including myself) feel like nothing was gained by the short ending and wanting more.
While the animation was very very smooth, it left me wanting more but at the same time I felt like nothing was achieved.
While there is nothing wrong with the animation itself, I am giving you a 7 because its far too short and I was hoping you could make a series out of this and add some story etc.
Technically its there (animation sense), but as a story and other elements that go with it, its lacking.
All in all, made me chuckle =)
The idea is there...
The idea and gameplay is there for sure. Everything about it is smooth and very well polished. That said not much happens to keep the player interested. Everything you currently have is very good though.
Some examples would be
1) Add a story type mode or levels so the player has motivation to continue through, sure achievements are nice but an actual level system would be better. Each level would be more difficult.
2) Add a variety in the zombies. Seeing the same zombie over and over can get repetitive, so why not add some different ones , like some blue, some with a weapon etc. And take it a step further, as you progress through the levels, introduce "Harder" zombies, such as one who is faster than normal, one who does more damage etc. That will introduce even more strategy to your game.
3) Add some rpg elements to get the player addicted. For example after every level you can upgrade your weapon or buy a new one etc, this will add to the addictiveness of the game.
These are just some ideas to progress your already very solid and fluid game.
Like I said earlier, nothing technically is wrong with it, its just that it needs more content =)
Thanks! The original was made like 7 months ago, but I just decided to add achievements as a little experiment. Turns out it takes simple script, but an annoying amount of it.
I actually sat here and read through all of it. It was truly amazing and definitely should help those starting out with animation (including myself). One very very very minor complaint I would add is sometimes its a little weird to see a Religious Passage in a Flash Tutorial but hey it's your animation, do what you wish =P
Honestly I thought this was amazing, and just through this I can tell you are truly passionate about not only Flash, but about Life. Good luck in your journey.
I understand how it may be a little weird. I put "Authors Thoughts" to make it more comfortable.
And its for everyones safety/protection. You read what it says. Just want everyone who reads this to be safe. Thank you for your appreciation. Glory to God. You have a good luck journey too.
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